Today I'm going to talk about the jonas brothers.
They are three brothers who are very recently formed a group. They are called joe, nick and kevin and the U.S. They are three brothers very young who sing very young, composed, played and act.
They are very famous throughout the world for his triumph in the world of music and cinema ,they are known for albums such as It's about time, Hold on and S.O.S. , which is the most famous of all.
Also we know the number of "Camp Rock" Disney Chanelles.
Finally this summer will keep it in a concert in Spain are so popular that its tickets were sold out in one day. For me they are one of my favorite groups.
I think it will be one of the best groups are younger than.
By: Andrea Saiz
A correct writing according to the extension you are asked for and the topic you chose, but revise the spelling of proper names and pay attention to the following mistakes:
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"They .... his triumph"
"Finally .... in Spain." - quite difficult to understand what you mean.
"three brothers very yound " (Word order)